11.23.2010

why man?

god created man first
because
naturally
She’s a woman
.
In an already
populated garden
don't you think
She already knew
who gives birth?
.

So the question
becomes
why is man
the first
human?
.

and what is
the rib?
.

imO
god created man….
as Her ridE

vvvvrroom…
come hear
and into mind
She said.
I made you
and now
I’m going to
devour you
right here
under this tree.
Vibrations were great
a test drive just bet
and the grass
grew greener
a bush did burn
and there was
the screamer
of a hot spring
gods ride
was a just
days dream
oceans parted
and the land
did grow
lightening came
from the
shadows below
as she rode
and he moaned
and they enjoyed
in what
Creation learned…
god
created a man
and gave him Her name
so that he’d know
when She
comes



”...oh my god! He said… She’s right!!...”

PLEASE!
USE MY NAME AGAIN AND AGAIN!
he begged ;)~

.

an apple fell from a tree just then
and a new tone
created
ante gravity.
God restored the man’s memory
and everyone lived happily ever and etc...
.

and THIS
is the way
it really went ‘down’....
.
I'm a scribe for the devil
and She was there...

first hand;
... and I think maybe... even before you came?



and from that moment
there was invented
the straddle
~it was never a rattle
damn snakes
always causing…
Ms.Chief.

4 comments:

Walker said...

Does it matter who came first as long as they waited until the other comes too :D

IzzyGumbo said...

until, while, as... yes!
and no it doesn't matter, tis the point of the 'rewrite'. ;)
thanks for your comment Walker.

Toyin O. said...

Nice poem.

IzzyGumbo said...

Glad you think so ToyinO
;) Was a fun play with words.