2.26.2010

Creature Comfort

a creature i am
hidden far away
darkness around me
in the guise of day
swimming in matters
of colored chatter
viewing life
in a form of water.

“what can turn the water to wine”
“a current flowing from the base of your spine”
.
Creator’s comfort
returns from sublime…
Created a creature
that it called Divine…
yet what have we done?
but labeled it ‘mine’.

4 comments:

Silent Poet Klaus said...

Some rebellious thoughts, I guess your talking about the most arrogant creature that have ever walked this planet.

Minimal yet natural rhymes, nice to read and will make you contemplate.

IzzyGumbo said...

Thanks for your visit and kind comment Klaus! :)

Daliana Pacuraru said...

I like your poems, make me think different somehow! Thanks!

IzzyGumbo said...

Thank you Wind! :) I've enjoyed visiting your blog also and will again. Thanks for the kind comments.